tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post4410166823226258371..comments2023-12-26T22:01:53.402-05:00Comments on The Synchronicity of Indeterminacy: Indeterminacyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-87662486079376520412008-02-19T13:36:00.000-05:002008-02-19T13:36:00.000-05:00Indie, at first I thought they are going to make h...Indie, at first I thought they are going to make him drive them to an abandoned place and leave his body there. Then that they are going to navigate him out of the known world and to a not normal party, something you can read in a Stephen King novel. Then that they are going to turn into aliens. Then that they are going to rob him and leave with his car. Ok, that's 4. Your ending was surprising, sweet and warming, I loved it!Ariel the Thiefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15097086287609287362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-9457755680537022062008-02-19T08:20:00.000-05:002008-02-19T08:20:00.000-05:00Lily: Your story was wonderful! I found it really ...Lily: Your story was wonderful! I found it really entertaining. :-)<BR/><BR/>Hobbes: Yes, I must be getting mellow or something.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-11927500667744268412008-02-19T08:13:00.000-05:002008-02-19T08:13:00.000-05:00Seems to me he could have fared a lot worse.Seems to me he could have fared a lot worse.Hobbeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17371953652907423093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-88621375468260797122008-02-19T03:18:00.000-05:002008-02-19T03:18:00.000-05:00BTW, thanks for trying to get me some contestants....BTW, thanks for trying to get me some contestants. But Brittney really is an intimidating gal. I think she scared them all away.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05779107279394475454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-35926729487803592882008-02-19T03:07:00.000-05:002008-02-19T03:07:00.000-05:00"Ooh La La!" cried Pierre. "Les girls!"He pulled h..."Ooh La La!" cried Pierre. "Les girls!"<BR/>He pulled his car over to the side of the road and beckoned for the two lovely lasses to come ride with him. He slicked back his hair and twirled his mustache, stroked his neat Van Dyke beard, and set his cap at a rakish angle."<BR/>"Where are you going, mon cheres a deux?" the randy Frenchman inquired, visions of menage a trois dancing in his head.<BR/>"To the Lesbian Power Convention, good sir," said the dark haired girl. "I'm Zoe and this is my wife Felicia. Thanks for offering us a ride. It's nice to meet people who are supportive of gay rights."<BR/>"Well, I was more right than I could have imagined," Pierre muttered to himself. "They are indeed Lez Girls."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05779107279394475454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-72060267032859250402008-02-18T14:02:00.000-05:002008-02-18T14:02:00.000-05:00Margaret! Thank you for stopping by - Ian knows a ...Margaret! Thank you for stopping by - Ian knows a lot of very clever bloggers. I'm proud that you stopped by and decided to link to me just like that. I think I would have done the same, had I happened across your blog first.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-57181293199663227072008-02-18T11:58:00.000-05:002008-02-18T11:58:00.000-05:00opps, pls see 'canadada.wordpress.com'opps, pls see 'canadada.wordpress.com'Canadadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01365719675447141225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-18729101935026042782008-02-18T11:57:00.000-05:002008-02-18T11:57:00.000-05:00Great story ... Blondeness and Auburn is cute 'ide...Great story ... Blondeness and Auburn is cute 'idea'. Got your 'link' from Ian of Hamburg ... Am gonna 'blogroll' you for a bit. Cheers, c p.s You might dig 'Words for Higher' chez moi.Canadadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01365719675447141225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-43095074421724393082008-02-18T00:15:00.000-05:002008-02-18T00:15:00.000-05:00I would love to know what the five endings were ;-...I would love to know what the five endings were ;-)<BR/><BR/>Glad you enjoyed it - and the line about the female population I was going to change because I didn't like it. (To something like "his thoughts were in the back seat") But with your thumbs up I've decided to leave it alone.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-38624501854420179712008-02-17T03:56:00.000-05:002008-02-17T03:56:00.000-05:00I had about five endings to the story in my head, ...I had about five endings to the story in my head, changing as going on with reading, not one of the candies.<BR/><BR/>Superb!<BR/><BR/>"female population of his car" was pretty funny, too.Ariel the Thiefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15097086287609287362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-77975605510730908472008-02-16T11:54:00.000-05:002008-02-16T11:54:00.000-05:00Thanks for sharing your impressions, Poojo - I gue...Thanks for sharing your impressions, Poojo - I guess everyone saw something else coming ;-)Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1201373648028276242008-02-16T10:43:00.000-05:002008-02-16T10:43:00.000-05:00I loved the ending. I really didn't see the candy ...I loved the ending. I really didn't see the candy coming :DLlamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266305392156642342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-7576808497104458392008-02-16T06:16:00.000-05:002008-02-16T06:16:00.000-05:00Lorena: Thank you, have a bon bon ;-)DBA: Glad you...Lorena: Thank you, have a bon bon ;-)<BR/><BR/>DBA: Glad you liked this story - I'm not entirely satisfied with the ending - in that I think I could have made it a little more mysterious. There's not enough hint of the supernatural, I believe. But maybe for the reader, it's all right the way it is.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-53009610063293859982008-02-16T04:52:00.000-05:002008-02-16T04:52:00.000-05:00Hey Inde...this story really blew me away, serious...Hey Inde...this story really blew me away, seriously seriously good and entertaining!DBA Lehanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12902739256082564278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-40680321544749054702008-02-15T10:52:00.000-05:002008-02-15T10:52:00.000-05:00Hey Indy,I've been a bit behind the eight ball the...Hey Indy,<BR/><BR/>I've been a bit behind the eight ball these days, occupied with things other than reading blogs, but just wanted to tell you I really like this story...very sweet (pun intended)<BR/><BR/>LorenaLorena's Blogbilingüehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06749142381387301033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-83942296849201878602008-02-14T21:46:00.000-05:002008-02-14T21:46:00.000-05:00Cooper: Yours is one of the hearts I'd give anythi...Cooper: Yours is one of the hearts I'd give anything to win! I finally know why I've been writing all these stories!Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-88336821054009087722008-02-14T21:34:00.000-05:002008-02-14T21:34:00.000-05:00I'm glad you are back writing it makes me heart fe...I'm glad you are back writing it makes me heart feel good, you won my heart with that one. Right in time - just before the day expires.Cooperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02465484210397122019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-44769174873204350372008-02-14T05:52:00.000-05:002008-02-14T05:52:00.000-05:00Doug: You sly trap-digger you!{illyria}: It has be...Doug: You sly trap-digger you!<BR/><BR/>{illyria}: It has been mutual. Your pages are a special place in the Internet.<BR/><BR/>Master Mistery: Consider your story then as matched with Photo 416. Fantastic story by the way - really liked it. Especially the line "all alone on the face of the Land."Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-33168370409510431242008-02-14T05:37:00.000-05:002008-02-14T05:37:00.000-05:00I wrote this story with the previously posted phot...I wrote this story with the previously posted photo in mind, but was too late. It still works, though not as well, with the new photo. Anyway, here goes:<BR/><BR/><B>ALL ALONE ON THE FACE OF THE LAND</B><BR/><BR/>One by one my people have been picked off, until only I remain, the last of my kind, all alone on the face of the Land. <BR/><BR/>We have been brutally squeezed. Poisoned. Decapitated. And now I am the only one left on the face of the Land.<BR/><BR/>All of us, deliberately removed, terminated, eradicated from the face of the Land...<BR/><BR/>“Hurry up, willya! We’re gonna be late,” comes a youthful voice floating through the open window of the bathroom. Inside the bathroom, a teenage girl stands in front of a mirror. The impatient voice belongs to her boyfriend. <BR/><BR/>“Yes, yes! I’m coming! Just doing my face,” shouts Jenny Land, while she continues dabbing her face with the powerful astringent claimed by its makers to be the most effective pimple treatment on the market.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Hope you like it. <BR/><BR/>Steve Schwarz<BR/><BR/>PS I've posted the story to my new blog <A HREF="cosmic-rapture.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">cosmic rapture</A> which is dina neat if I say so myself, so why not pay me a visit and see for yourselfmasterymisteryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844831221838590812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-82046146373892277192008-02-14T03:42:00.000-05:002008-02-14T03:42:00.000-05:00i missed you, and this place. i've run out of word...i missed you, and this place. i've run out of words for the moment but i'd love to read yours.{illyria}https://www.blogger.com/profile/11333497030751042143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-87833961555104583572008-02-13T22:39:00.000-05:002008-02-13T22:39:00.000-05:00"Wait! I haven't finished digging the trap""Wait! I haven't finished digging the trap"Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-43305071135841464972008-02-13T18:50:00.000-05:002008-02-13T18:50:00.000-05:00That's a trade secret Ian.I'll post the story tomo...That's a trade secret Ian.<BR/><BR/>I'll post the story tomorrow. Just in case anyone remembers Indeterminacy still exists and stops by to post their own tale. Also, it never hurts to do some polishing.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-30446228688820222762008-02-13T18:47:00.000-05:002008-02-13T18:47:00.000-05:00Indie, where do you find all your lovelies? ;-)So ...Indie, where <I>do</I> you find all your lovelies? ;-)<BR/><BR/>So where can we find your story, or is it staring at me somewhere on this page?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-90267177146843985172008-02-13T18:37:00.000-05:002008-02-13T18:37:00.000-05:00Ha! I finished my story. So no danger of it being ...Ha! I finished my story. So no danger of it being weeks and weeks until I post it.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.com