tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post2408561993464058357..comments2023-12-26T22:01:53.402-05:00Comments on The Synchronicity of Indeterminacy: Indeterminacyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-27966112372728027302007-03-01T13:09:00.000-05:002007-03-01T13:09:00.000-05:00Frances Bo Bancess: Thank you. I would like to try...Frances Bo Bancess: Thank you. I would like to try this with the markers myself, actually.<BR/><BR/>Aruseri: Thanks for stopping by. Yes is a beautiful word.<BR/><BR/>Fembot: I wish I'd discovered markers much earlier in life. Thanks for your comment.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-34714072694838913402007-03-01T10:22:00.000-05:002007-03-01T10:22:00.000-05:00i'm yours. beautifully done.i'm yours. beautifully done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-53735130547522370872007-02-24T12:20:00.000-05:002007-02-24T12:20:00.000-05:00Just make sure you say "yes" if it ever happens. T...Just make sure you say "yes" if it ever happens. This girl didn't. <BR/><BR/>-Marshall Lentini<BR/><BR/>(grüße v. aruseri, kerl!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-34041917853920643682007-02-08T00:44:00.000-05:002007-02-08T00:44:00.000-05:00pick up the marker, pick up the marker, please! ho...pick up the marker, pick up the marker, please! how heart-breakingly beautiful, defiantly seductive, i hope to be wooed like that one day...Frances bo bancesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00764627067116733299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-74497868962963690902007-01-31T11:37:00.000-05:002007-01-31T11:37:00.000-05:00Mrs. W: I'm not sure who is writing and who is tel...Mrs. W: I'm not sure who is writing and who is telling the story. Usually I also never know who reads the stories either, unless they are nice enough to leave a comment, so thanks for doing so.<br /><br />I Never heard of the Italian writer, but your suggestion seems to be I should rather read my own stories than his. Actually it's no fun to read my own stories because I usally know what's going to happen. No surprises at all.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-18459664805868892052007-01-31T08:24:00.000-05:002007-01-31T08:24:00.000-05:00Thanks, Indie. It actually took just two quick tri...Thanks, Indie. It actually took just two quick tries, but your suggestion about hypnosis helped a lot.<br />I liked your story. Reminded me of that Italian writer, you know, IF ON A WINTER"S NIGHT A TRAVELER is one of his books. Anyway, don't like them, but it was fine in a short story. I'm a little slow, so please clarify: the writer is writing to herself? Appropriate--writing is so narcissistic in any form.Hobbeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17371953652907423093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-5431591989781625472007-01-31T02:08:00.000-05:002007-01-31T02:08:00.000-05:00As always, a very interesting read. Perfect proof...As always, a very interesting read. Perfect proof that one can be very erotic without being graphic. Keep em coming!<br /><a href="http://www.eightnotenough.info/mainsitemap.php">Matt</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-34274207948536439982007-01-26T20:31:00.000-05:002007-01-26T20:31:00.000-05:00Hey Jamie, always nice when you stop by.
Good po...Hey Jamie, always nice when you stop by. <br /><br />Good point, but you will never have to ask these questions!Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-36019286201569003802007-01-26T18:51:00.000-05:002007-01-26T18:51:00.000-05:00It's getting hot in here!
Body graffiti should b...It's getting hot in here!<br /><br /><br />Body graffiti should be well thought out before one makes it permanent. One should ask, How will this look in twenty years when some extra flab or wrinkles have developed on my body?Jamie Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11036600186909466411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-39590569383011265462007-01-26T01:19:00.000-05:002007-01-26T01:19:00.000-05:00Doug: *takes bow* *marker drops out of shirt pocke...Doug: *takes bow* *marker drops out of shirt pocket onto the floor*<br /><br />Cooper: Thank you. But I'm also wondering if the story could be taken as a metaphor for masturbation.<br /><br />{illyria}: You're the princess when it comes to fantastic, dexterous prose.<br /><br />Cheesemeister: Me on the naughty observer blog? Wow! Are there dirty pictures? Thanks for the new Pansi link. Is she taking spelling lessons down there?Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-60299759063717265612007-01-26T00:45:00.000-05:002007-01-26T00:45:00.000-05:00A few more vivid descriptions and you could have a...A few more vivid descriptions and you could have a guest spot on The Naughty Observer blog!<br />Nicely done. I actually prefer suggestive erotica to full-on blatant porno, but I am, as the Brits sometimes say, "a right old slag" when it comes to the craft of writing and I could pen either for money.<br />BTW, you don't have to live a completely Pansi-less life. Come see her, Aubvey, Brittney and Emrald in their new home at http://newpansi.blogspot.com<br />Of course it isn't quite the same, but it's pretty crazy, which translates to fun for us and scary for normal people!Cie Cheesemeisterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14871507564733240927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-9028530967440949132007-01-25T06:54:00.000-05:002007-01-25T06:54:00.000-05:00such fantastic, dexterous prose. but then sweet sl...such fantastic, dexterous prose. but then sweet slabs of bellies always did provoke humankind. our ancestors can attest to that.{illyria}https://www.blogger.com/profile/13775354102448016426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-51198891292675132572007-01-23T18:56:00.000-05:002007-01-23T18:56:00.000-05:00Such finery from what appears at first glance to b...Such finery from what appears at first glance to be a photo that would provoke only masturbatory fantasies.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-17256906263077439562007-01-20T17:01:00.000-05:002007-01-20T17:01:00.000-05:00Fantastic, Indie. That tatooed woman.
Alouicious...Fantastic, Indie. That tatooed woman.<br /><br />Alouicious needed instructions. I don't care to know.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-72904621855720233222007-01-20T05:46:00.000-05:002007-01-20T05:46:00.000-05:00Doug: That's OK, if the instructions aren't to you...Doug: That's OK, if the instructions aren't to your liking, you can always improvise.<br /><br />Mush: Love your take on this. What a brilliant place to hide crib notes.<br /><br />Peter: And thank you for your answer, and for stopping by.<br /><br />Al: There's a grand elegance to your story. I really like it.<br /><br />Cheesemaster: If she loses any more weight, this is going to turn into fine print!<br /><br />Frances: Du sprichst deutsch! Und deine Geschichte fasziniert mich auch.<br /><br />Lammy: I needed a shot of wit this morning. Cool story.<br /><br />Anonymous: This is the first time I couldn't tell spam from steak.<br /><br />Mrs. Weirsdo: That was stunning! I admire your writing on this one. Thank you for sharing your inspiration. It looks very well polished, too.<br /><br />Doug: You need instructions?<br /><br />Tom&Icy: Good dogs. You win a scooby snack.<br /><br />Cooper: But now you are old enough to be written on... ;-)<br /><br />Brittney: I concur.<br /><br />Cooper: My muse's contribution was a joke, she told me. I found it where she left it for me, in the empty text file where I wanted to write my story, but had given up. I say it's good, too.<br /><br />Tom&Icy: She shouldn't have lost all that weight.<br /><br />Mrs. W: Always use the non-toxic markers.<br /><br />---<br />Everyone: My story is written now, and I'm just in the process of polishing it up. I think it has turned out something like a Möbius strip.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-80067703574085157202007-01-18T09:10:00.000-05:002007-01-18T09:10:00.000-05:00Ooo! Great one, T&I.
One day Faulkner, who was st...Ooo! Great one, T&I.<br /><br />One day Faulkner, who was staying at the Algonquin Hotel, met the proprietor. <br />"How are you today, Mr. Faulkner?" inquired the man.<br />"Ohhh. Not good. I'm sick to my stomach," responded the alcoholic novelist.<br />"Oh, I'm sorry. Something you wrote, perhaps?" the proprietor said.Hobbeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17371953652907423093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-88358848142406713322007-01-17T12:10:00.000-05:002007-01-17T12:10:00.000-05:00She was going to write a novel, but she didn't hav...She was going to write a novel, but she didn't have the stomach for it.Tom & Icyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02184377353312923689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-35171291254842132972007-01-16T07:39:00.000-05:002007-01-16T07:39:00.000-05:00Doug: She has to, if she married me.Doug: She has to, if she married me.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-59334849680468985622007-01-16T07:28:00.000-05:002007-01-16T07:28:00.000-05:00Your Muse has a great sense of irony.Your Muse has a great sense of irony.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-4221443717681496702007-01-15T00:22:00.000-05:002007-01-15T00:22:00.000-05:00I just saw your muse's contribution and it was del...I just saw your muse's contribution and it was delightful.<br /><br />A blog - ti's hard to keep up with at times is it not.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-86408451547532213522007-01-13T00:02:00.000-05:002007-01-13T00:02:00.000-05:00Cheesemeister, you story made my mouth water!Cheesemeister, you story made my mouth water!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-14848660270036735142007-01-12T01:07:00.000-05:002007-01-12T01:07:00.000-05:00Sorry.I'm so busy getting ready to return to NY th...Sorry.I'm so busy getting ready to return to NY the only thing that comes to mind is my mother yelling at my brother for writing on me when I was younger.<br /><br />Your minions have done a super job though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-88103181141244703992007-01-11T13:32:00.000-05:002007-01-11T13:32:00.000-05:00The instructions for removing water from a bucket ...The instructions for removing water from a bucket are written on the bottom of the pail.Tom & Icyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02184377353312923689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-24395937906489189512007-01-11T11:13:00.000-05:002007-01-11T11:13:00.000-05:00"But," complained Alouicious, "the instructions ar..."But," complained Alouicious, "the instructions are on the wrong side!"Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-42495703988098330942007-01-09T09:33:00.000-05:002007-01-09T09:33:00.000-05:00Angela's navel had hypnotic powers. Fatefully, the...Angela's navel had hypnotic powers. Fatefully, the summer she turned 16, midriff-baring styles were in. People who caught a glimpse of the navel found themselves doing strange things: going for long journeys to places they had never heard of, but had always longed for; kissing total strangers, who inexplicably kissed back; but most of all, writing. Scrawling graffitti on the walls, penning novels (without even counting the words), clicking out stories in cyberspace, and even inking messages to the Navel itself, in languages they didn't know.<br />The hypergraphia seemed to be contagious. Statesmen, parents and teachers who had never seen the navel found themselves afflicted with the compulsion to write something, anything, anywhere. Schools closed, although children were writing more, and far more interestingly, than ever before. Even the illiterate found themselves laboriously copying combinations of letters ("HBO," "ESPN") on their living room walls. Bizarre laws were passed by legislatures who had written themselves into office at the ballot box, because everyone else was too busy writing to run, or even vote. <br />Almost incidentally, the phenomenon ended itself. A Muslim extremist, who had taken advantage of the situation to become Sultan of Angela's heretofore Western democracy, penned a law requiring all women to cover up from head to toe. This was widely publicized in all the new upstart news sources, and Angela, who was writing an encyclopedia of style, took note of it. Always a trend-setter, she donned the burka, and lost her influence forever.Hobbeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17371953652907423093noreply@blogger.com