tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post115348594701650179..comments2023-12-26T22:01:53.402-05:00Comments on The Synchronicity of Indeterminacy: Indeterminacyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1156664292208123752006-08-27T03:38:00.000-04:002006-08-27T03:38:00.000-04:00Indie - I have posted your story here, and credite...Indie - I have posted your story here, and credited you. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/38751729/<BR/><BR/>Everyone else - I posted all your stories there too, with your names and links to your blogs. Hopefully that'll be okay with you all, if not, let me know and I'll take them down right away.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10600044864381807726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1155013537534512342006-08-08T01:05:00.000-04:002006-08-08T01:05:00.000-04:00Cooper: Thanks - I feel better now about being so ...Cooper: Thanks - I feel better now about being so late. Istanbul sounds great. I also enjoy the therapy of the North Sea strand in the Netherlands.<BR/><BR/>Doug: Stop hetzing me! Cooper said it's ok.<BR/><BR/>Pizazz: Your thumbs up means a lot to me. I forgot to mention, if you'd like to repost this anywhere, that's fine. It is a lovely photo.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1155003164649190622006-08-07T22:12:00.000-04:002006-08-07T22:12:00.000-04:00That is a beautiful story... it means all the more...That is a beautiful story... it means all the more to me because I am a dancer! Thankyou for using my photo, and thankyou to everyone who commented with their great stories too!Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10600044864381807726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154990232060340872006-08-07T18:37:00.000-04:002006-08-07T18:37:00.000-04:00Indie, just get in on time, ok, buddy?Cooper, soun...Indie, just get in on time, ok, buddy?<BR/><BR/>Cooper, sounds grand. Those of us who still post regularly need the therapy even worse.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154740825950703352006-08-04T21:20:00.000-04:002006-08-04T21:20:00.000-04:00That was worth the wait inde.I wish people would s...That was worth the wait inde.<BR/><BR/><BR/>I wish people would stop feeling like they have to make excuses for not having the time - i mean i do the same thing.<BR/><BR/>Maybe we could all go to some kind of therapy together say in..........Istanbul.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154732970880073422006-08-04T19:09:00.000-04:002006-08-04T19:09:00.000-04:00Hey Miz B, It's a warm feeling knowing you enjoyed...Hey Miz B, It's a warm feeling knowing you enjoyed the story. To me the photo is especially lovely and aesthetic to look at. Now I hope I can get my next story written by Monday.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154727455696656222006-08-04T17:37:00.000-04:002006-08-04T17:37:00.000-04:00Wow Indie! That was beautiful and I do not quite ...Wow Indie! That was beautiful and I do not quite know what to say! Glad to have you back and yeah, this heat is unbearable! Hope it gets down to tolerable soon!Miz BoheMiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684634451330079565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154707024711837532006-08-04T11:57:00.000-04:002006-08-04T11:57:00.000-04:00Thanks Doug! And that takes a lot of pressure off....Thanks Doug! And that takes a lot of pressure off. Because now all I have to do is write the worse thing you read in a long time and I'll have done everything. I'm sure that won't take long.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154706851844123372006-08-04T11:54:00.000-04:002006-08-04T11:54:00.000-04:00Indie, that's the best thing I've read in a long t...Indie, that's the best thing I've read in a long time. Worth the wait. Or most of the wait.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154689413469351672006-08-04T07:03:00.000-04:002006-08-04T07:03:00.000-04:00Frances: I forget to thank you for your story yest...Frances: I forget to thank you for your story yesterday - sorry. I enjoy the blood. Way back whenever I wrote something there would be blood, or something drastic. Usually I blew up everything in the end. I'm yearning for a return to the days when I could write a story that was one paragraph.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154641694075291922006-08-03T17:48:00.000-04:002006-08-03T17:48:00.000-04:00Clown: I'm in awe at the poetry of your story.I ne...Clown: I'm in awe at the poetry of your story.<BR/><BR/>I never want anyone to think this is a competition with anyone - it's all about the varying impressions to the photo.<BR/><BR/>Mutha: You have a great sense of humor and fantasy. Fantasy humor. I'm long overdue to write a funny story, but I can never chose what comes out.<BR/><BR/>Lynsey: Your choice of words and vocabulary are inspiring to me. It does seem like something magic should happen in that gown.<BR/><BR/>Doug: I do hope you're surviving. It's bad enough that I stopped blogging for a week.<BR/><BR/>River: Hello back to you. I had bad luck with work this week, that is, I had a lot of it - I've been staying late a few days and that took away all my time I usually had to visit and to write. You're always welcome to stop by as often as as seldom as you like.<BR/><BR/>---<BR/><BR/>Everyone: My apologies for the delay with the story. I'll tip you off to a post for next week. I was going through some boxes and found some early stories I wrote when I was about 10 years old. You will all find out what a prodigy I was at that tender age. Even then I was experimenting with short fiction, shock endings, stories msatched with a picture I drew myself. Oh will you all be amazed :-)Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154615776337146952006-08-03T10:36:00.000-04:002006-08-03T10:36:00.000-04:00Hi Indie,Just came over to say hello. Too busy wit...Hi Indie,<BR/>Just came over to say hello. Too busy with work to get much blogging and commenting done. :(~Nitoo Das~https://www.blogger.com/profile/15632551517409658722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154283991209273652006-07-30T14:26:00.000-04:002006-07-30T14:26:00.000-04:00Indie, there must be a half dozen of us or more. ...Indie, there must be a half dozen of us or more. Heat is misery.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154173445426536462006-07-29T07:44:00.000-04:002006-07-29T07:44:00.000-04:00Coelia had spent the last ten years as a teacher, ...Coelia had spent the last ten years as a teacher, before that, ten years in service, and before that, ten years in training. She could barely remember the years before that. Certainly, her hand-ground grain childhood had been transformed into an ostrich pâté, dormice stuffed with nuts, and fricassee of roses in pastry shells maturity. In all that time she had kept, true in her heart, a flame which could not be quenched - ignis inextinctus she called it, being true to the romantic that she was.<BR/><BR/>And now, after the years of waiting, Coelia could be free of the vestments of the refined living, she would finally be free to follow her heart’s desire. <BR/><BR/>In the fleeting moments, the throbbing silences, she made herself even more beautiful using the unguents and the colours available to her in that time, anointing her most secret pulses with rare fragrances from the East. Coelia donned her gown, and fixed the sacred ribbons in her hair like a bride. Her breath was uneven as her heart pounded with the excitement. The years of training coupled with the ever present burn of the flame, had honed her desire, her lust, her passion to an intoxicating frenzy that now, finally could be made manifest.<BR/><BR/>Quaking, she stepped forward, and a voice, animal with desire, called from the core of her heart - ‘I seize you, beloved.’<BR/><BR/>No woman, none, neither before nor since, has ever felt so sure about wallboard.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1154133758877328632006-07-28T20:42:00.000-04:002006-07-28T20:42:00.000-04:00No apologies necessary Indie. Hang in their with T...No apologies necessary Indie. Hang in their with Twain and the heat!Muthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03172749181642285989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153856036207439432006-07-25T15:33:00.000-04:002006-07-25T15:33:00.000-04:00The tempation to read the stories posted already i...The tempation to read the stories posted already is very great, but I'm going to wait until mine is finished. It's about half-baked at the moment. It's very hot here, and impossible to think. Plus I found out how much I have to catch up with these days.<BR/><BR/>Cooper: Let's you and I disappear somewhere and procrastinate together.<BR/><BR/>Doug: I'm touched. Do you really think I have more than one fan?<BR/><BR/>Alix: I miss the days when you and Retarius were blogging. Those were great times.<BR/><BR/>Enemy: The Libori fest is free. The religious part of it is celebrated in the Paderborn Cathedral - once a year since before the year 800 or something there's a procession with the remains of the Saint Libori. That's truly incredible. In modern times the city has one week-long long party to accompany that. Music and events everywhere. It's well-kept secret. I used to live there too. There's a site but it's in German: <A HREF="http://www.libori.de" REL="nofollow">www.libori.de</A>.Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153853660456293302006-07-25T14:54:00.000-04:002006-07-25T14:54:00.000-04:00Indie, your fans are a patient people, but we do h...Indie, your fans are a patient people, but we do have rooms like the one in the picture.Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153807115504557732006-07-25T01:58:00.000-04:002006-07-25T01:58:00.000-04:00the room spun around once more and she was slammed...the room spun around once more and she was slammed against the wall. or was it the floor? or the roof even? she couldn't remember when she entered the room or how long she'd been there, but she was sure the light had been on the floor. or maybe it was on the ceiling and she had entered mid rotation. how had she entered the room in the first place? as she pondered where the door had gone the room spun around and she hit the roof now floor, knocked uncontious, blood dripping from her ears... <BR/><BR/>i'm a sucker for a bit of blood, confusion and tragedy. have a good one.Frances bo bancesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00764627067116733299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153797502914757362006-07-24T23:18:00.000-04:002006-07-24T23:18:00.000-04:00indie indie: enjoy and don't worry...........enjoy...indie indie: enjoy and don't worry...........enjoy.............Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153747664558306562006-07-24T09:27:00.000-04:002006-07-24T09:27:00.000-04:00"I know I left that magical portal around here som..."I know I left that magical portal around here somewhere...I've got to get out of here before someone sees me in this toilet paper outfit."Muthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03172749181642285989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153744333047030742006-07-24T08:32:00.000-04:002006-07-24T08:32:00.000-04:00"I should have known having all my keys made in wh..."I should have known having all my keys made in white was a bad idea."Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153689795164180702006-07-23T17:23:00.000-04:002006-07-23T17:23:00.000-04:00This isn't a story: gosh, I like doing them and I ...This isn't a story: gosh, I like doing them and I don't do enough. Apologies for the lack of visit--how much for tickets to that festival--I am a medievalist--will they throw in the plane tickets from New York for free?Enemy of the Republichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17342253341470198835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153615199639408392006-07-22T20:39:00.000-04:002006-07-22T20:39:00.000-04:00greetings, inde dear... long time no read.hope you...greetings, inde dear... long time no read.<BR/>hope you are well, and hope to get by more often.alixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927030300371366769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153596197693697002006-07-22T15:23:00.000-04:002006-07-22T15:23:00.000-04:00*Correction*: it's 'not to make' in place of to ma...*Correction*: it's 'not to make' in place of to make. Sorry.The Clownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159265613740566755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1153548332593079842006-07-22T02:05:00.000-04:002006-07-22T02:05:00.000-04:00There's one more thing, Indie, that I'd like to me...There's one more thing, Indie, that I'd like to mention - I'm not here to compete with you. Please don't bring in any concepts of competition here. Your writings are as different from mine as mine are from yours. I sincerely believe that the only person you can compete with in fiction is yourself. So, I'd request you or anyone else to make such undue comparisons if ever my writing succeeds in becoming even half as interesting as yours. <BR/>Have a wonderful weekend. Smile.The Clownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159265613740566755noreply@blogger.com