tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post113447799402509467..comments2023-12-26T22:01:53.402-05:00Comments on The Synchronicity of Indeterminacy: Indeterminacyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134566850683358752005-12-14T08:27:00.000-05:002005-12-14T08:27:00.000-05:00:) I think your muse is a real one, like the ones ...:) I think your muse is a real one, like the ones of the ancient greece. The mythical entities that talked to poets and inspired them to write. Now we know whats really hidden behind your stories, hehe.adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09574720394269507883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134551426484083232005-12-14T04:10:00.000-05:002005-12-14T04:10:00.000-05:00Viruswitch: Your comments always make my day. I di...Viruswitch: Your comments always make my day. I didn't know I was doing all that. Had I tried to, it probably wouldn't have worked. My muse deserves credit for the end. She told me my original end wasn't working, and then I blurted out the new one, which she approved of.<BR/><BR/>Mushroom: Sounds like a fun sleepover. Autobiographical? ;-)Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134520559280527332005-12-13T19:35:00.000-05:002005-12-13T19:35:00.000-05:00"GO TO SLEEP, YOU TWO!" Mother shouted at them fro..."GO TO SLEEP, YOU TWO!" Mother shouted at them from the doorway of Kaitlyn's room. "I'm not going to let you have any more sleepovers if you can't be quiet!"<BR/><BR/>"Yes, Mom," Kaitlyn said, and Katherine added, "We're sorry, we'll try to be quiet." Mother turned away and closed the door, and the girls giggled (hushing themselves) as the darkness crecendoed to near-full other than what came through the partially open window.<BR/><BR/>A muffled male voice whispered from between their midsections, "Is she gone yet?" Kaitlyn lifted the sheet and said "yes!" and Katherine sunk her head back a little, adding "Man, that was close... I was sure your mom would see his heels between the stuffed animals at the foot of your bed."<BR/><BR/>Kaitlyn then staged-whispered under the cover, "Now get back to work."The Mushroomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13466433750698090728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134518552610175162005-12-13T19:02:00.000-05:002005-12-13T19:02:00.000-05:00Oh oh my God.. :)) again a very effective story! W...Oh oh my God.. :)) again a very effective story! Where/How do you fit all those emotions in such a short story? You are able to drag the reader from one intense emotion to another equally intense but maybe exactly opposite and create this effective shock! Another thing, which is worth of envy, is the reality of it, the story has all the strange surealistic logics of a real nightmare. Very unpredictable the end of it. You never cease to amaze me.adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09574720394269507883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134504590880088662005-12-13T15:09:00.000-05:002005-12-13T15:09:00.000-05:00Dlak: Maybe it's a question of who's stalking who....Dlak: Maybe it's a question of who's stalking who. I'm not sure.<BR/><BR/>Doug: Thanks. I think they're women. Why note life the covers and have a look?Indeterminacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112417911577798263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134499776674841712005-12-13T13:49:00.000-05:002005-12-13T13:49:00.000-05:00Very spooky and well-told. Regarding the picture,...Very spooky and well-told. Regarding the picture, though, are you sure those are women?Doug The Unahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753071669562594194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6661194.post-1134484933543725132005-12-13T09:42:00.000-05:002005-12-13T09:42:00.000-05:00Did he untie them or did they untie him?Did he untie them or did they untie him?DLAKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05164488006316517005noreply@blogger.com